A screener on an HR Manager posting does this job for a living, so vague claims read as an obvious gap. Tailoring means stating headcount supported and matching the functions the posting names. That match, more than any other line on the page, decides whether this resume gets a second look.
The claim that ATS systems auto-reject 75 percent of resumes traces to a 2012 marketing claim, not research. (traced to a 2012 vendor marketing claim)
Start with the version a recruiter opens right now, then make these moves against it.
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